viernes, 26 de septiembre de 2014

CLASS #9 - REPORT - READING SKILL

ISFD 41

Language and Written Expression IV

Teacher: Stella Maris Saubidet Oyhamburu

Student: Stefania Perez



Reading skill - Report

          The reading skill is a combination of very different cognitive strategies that people put into practice, usually unconsciously, when reading. This meant a lot of work when trying to explain what it is to read and how it affects real life situations, even more when we had to take into account that this assignment contained specific rules that we had to follow unavoidably. To start with, working in a group of around 7 students was a bit complicated beacuse of personal issues and obligations; however, we managed to organize. Secondly, it was necessary to read the whole text, which explined the other 3 macro-skills, in order to understand and be able to summarize the explanation of the reading skill. So, when reading our part, we had a broaden idea of what it means to read. Therefore, another problem arose, at least for me, because there was a need to limit the concepts and having in mind so much ideas was a bit confusing. Then, the fact that one of the goals of the presentation was to make the class interactive brought another objective to think about, since we are not really used to setting a task when delivering lessons to our own classmates. Thus, I strongly believe that this is one of the most challenging assignments we had to do this year, what justifies such effort. 

martes, 19 de agosto de 2014

CLASS #7 - COMFORT WOMEN - JAPANESE DENIAL

ISFD 41
Language and Written Expression IV
Teacher: Stella Saubidet
Student: Stefania Perez

Comfort Women - Japanese Denial

Violence against women refers to any violent act whose target is specifically women because of their gender and to “the crucial mechanisms by which women are forced into a subordinate position compared to men” (UN Declaration of the Elimination of Violence Against Women)­, and has from intermediate to long-term physical, sexual and mental consequences, not only on women but also on their families and communities. During military conflicts, women are the ones who must face destructive forms of violence, displayed to reach military or political objectives, terrorizing people, destroying families and communities. For centuries, the rape of women during war times has been taken as unavoidable and not regarded as a war crime despite the suffering of the abused women and the evidences of the consequences it has. In Japan, during World War II, military forces established brothels where “Comfort Women” were kept against their will and forced into sexual slavery by soldiers; nevertheless, the Japanese government claimed no military responsibility over the comfort women centres, has refused their existence as such and denied giving official apologies and support.
            Up to 200,000 women worked in the brothels arranged by the Japanese army during the Second World War, most of them were from Korea, China and other Asian countries occupied by Japan. The girls were 11, 12, 13, and 14 years old when they were kidnapped and trafficked to “comfort stations”, where they were abused uncountable times each day, apart from being beaten, threatened, attacked with knives by soldiers and even forced to have home-made abortions if they become pregnant. The women were not allowed to leave the stations, some of them were given garments and make up but some others were given nothing in compensation for their suffering. Consequently, numerous women died because of infections and sexually transmitted diseases; others committed suicide and several were killed by the soldiers compelling other women to watch the punishment. Some surviving women obtained freedom when the War ended and then returned to their countries; however, most of them felt it was impossible to go back home because of the visible and invisible consequences of being a comfort women, so they stayed in the country where they had unwillingly worked as prostitutes, and even died there. “Comfort Women” are still waiting for acknowledgement and ask Japan to recognize that they have been obliged and abused by its soldiers.
“Comfort Women” have given their testimony all over the world after years of silence because of fear and shame. This is the case of Chung Seo–woon and Hah Sang-suk, two Korean girls who were cheated, trafficked and abused by Japanese soldiers. Two men said to Chung Seo-woon that she would be taken to work to a Japanese textile factory, but instead she was taken to a warehouse with other thousand girls, their hair was cut and then they were taken to Indonesia. Chung Seo-woon was sterilized by a Japanese doctor and later sent to a “comfort station” where she was visited by, on average, fifty men a day and a hundred on weekends. “I was given morphine shots, whether I liked it or not”, explained Chung Seo-woon. She was only given rice, miso soup and turnip pickle to eat. She used to be hit and kicked if she resisted and water was poured all over her if she fainted. Similarly, Hah Sang-suk agreed to go to China to work in a factory, but she was taken to an inn where a doctor examined her and sent her to one of the twenty rooms of the place. “Usually, about ten to twenty men came each day”, said Hah. She and the other girls were fed by Chinese people and they were given make up and clothes but no money. Hah Sang-suk also used to be beaten and kicked, and she fought with the soldiers who refused to wear condoms. When Japan lost the war, the girls were set free; yet, owing to the shame of her body shape, Hah decided to remain in the country where she had been kept, since she was afraid of what people in her village might say or think of her. These women are still suffering the consequences of this experience and they wonder whether it is more painful to be an ex-comfort women or the fact that the Japanese government accuses them of having accepted to work as prostitutes.
“Comfort Women” are still waiting a formal apology on the part of the Japanese government who have only given sporadic unofficial apologies and whose Prime Minister still denies have taken part on this issue and claims that comfort women were willing volunteers. In 1993, a Japanese cabinet secretary recognized the existence of the so-called “comfort stations” and the role of the soldiers, and even offered an unofficial apology. However, as historian Bernd Stöver (a historian at Potsdam University) explained “the apologies were isolated occurrences; there was never a full admission of guilt nor was there any official financial compensation program”, and that is the reason why ex-comfort women have not accepted the apologies and strongly defend their history. On the other hand, by 2007, Prime Minister Shinzo Abe expressed that “Comfort Women” were not forced sexual slaves, but instead enthusiastic volunteers. He commented to a reporter that “there was no evidence to prove there was coercion as initially suggested. That largely changes what constitutes the definition of coercion, and we have to take it from there”. As a response to this, the 78 year-old South Korean survivor Lee Yong-Soo, who was taken in 1944 by Japanese soldiers to a brothel in Taiwan, demanded that “the Japanese government must not run from its responsibilities. I want them to apologise and to admit that they took me away when I was a little girl to be a sex slave”. Lee Yong-Soo speaks on behalf of the other 200.000 similar stories of maltreatment and suffering, and asks for respect and an admission of guilt.
Approximately, three quarters of “Comfort Women” died during the Second World War and the survivors were left infertile, due to sexual trauma and sexually transmitted diseases, they have visible and invisible scars, and even after more than 70 years of the war end, as a 2011 clinical study shows, ex-comfort women are more predisposed to suffer Post Traumatic Stress Disorder. Yet, the surviving “Comfort Women” and their supporters still struggle for their rights: they have created organizations for the ex-comfort women to live, they have asked for financial support to governments and private organizations and they participate on “Wednesday Demonstrations” in front of the Japanese Embassy in the USA, among other forms of protest. “Comfort women” claim for recognition and liability on the part of the Japanese government, whose history still doubts about the existence of sexually coerced women, and they expect that the passed away comfort women be honoured by the acknowledgement of their suffering now and then.



Bibliography

·         Williamson, L. (2013). Comfort Women: South Korean Survivors of Japanese brothels. BBC News Magazine, 22680705. Retrieved from http://www.bbc.com/news/magazine-22680705
·         Stop Violence against Women: “Comfort Women”. Retrieved from http://www.amnesty.org.nz/files/Comfort-Women-factsheet.pdf
·         Brooks, K. (2013, November 25). The History of Comfort Women. A WWII Tragedy we can´t forget. Huffing post Arts & Culture, 4325584. Retrieved from http://www.huffingpost.com/2013/11/25/comfortwomen-wanted
·         Spritzer, K. (2014, February 25). Japan´s Lawmakers Launch Campaign against “Comfort Women” Memorials. Time. Retrieved from http://world.time.com/2014/02/25/japan-comfort-women-memorials/
·         Koh, J. (2007, January 01). Comfort Women: Human Rights of Women from Than to Present. University of Georgia School of Law, Digital Commons. Retrieved from http://digitalcommons.law.uga.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1080&context=stu_llm
·         Tull, M. (2014, May 19). Symptoms of PTSD after a Rape. Retrieved from http://ptsd.about.com/od/causesanddevelopment/a/consequencesofrape.htm
·         Ahn, C. (2014, June 24). Seeking Justice – Or at Least the Truth – for “Comfort Women”. Foreign Policy in Focus – Institute for Policy Studies. Retrieved from http://fpif.org/seeking-justice-least-truth-comfort-women/
·         Smith, N. (2008). I Was Wrong: The Meanings of Apologies. USA, New York: Cambridge University Press. Retrieved from http://books.google.com.ar/books?id=_sTIibjd_JUC&printsec=frontcover&source=gbs_ge_summary_r&cad=0#v=onepage&q&f=false
·         WILPF International. (2013, May 30). “Comfort Women”: Japan is still in denial. Women´s International League for Peace and Freedom. Retrieved from http://www.wilpfinternational.org/comfort-women-japan-still-in-denial/
·         Testimonies of former “Comfort Women” from Korea. (n.d.). Retrieved from http://koreaverband.ahkorea.com/_file/trostfrauen/Testimonies_KoreanComfortWomen_english.pdf
·         Former Comfort Woman tells uncomforting story. (n.d.). Retrieved from http://www.dw.de/former-comfort-woman-tells-uncomforting-story/a-17060384 
·         United Nations General Assembly. (1993, December 20). Declaration of Elimination of Violence against Women. Retrieved from http://www.un.org/documents/ga/res/48/a48r104.htm 




sábado, 12 de julio de 2014

CLASS #6 - ACADEMIC WRITING SUMMARY

ISFD 41. Language and Written Expression IV. Saubidet Stella.
Student: Perez Stefania.

Irvin, Lennie L. What is Academic Writing?. Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Volume 1. Ed. Charles Lowe, Pavel Zemliansky. Parlor Press. 2010. Print.

What is Academic Writing?

INTRODUCTION: THE ACADEMIC WRITING TASK
This chapter´s objective is to acquaint starter students with academic writing, its characteristics and types, and its constituents.

The Academic Writing Situation
A new writer has an unexpended perspective of the writing situation in general because writers are split from the audience in time and place, hence the necessity to create a context, which is one of the main goals of any writer: in-context communication. According to Lee Ann Carroll, in College, writers do “Literacy Tasks”, an equivalent to “Writing Assignments”, which requires researching skills(search for in-depth information, keep trace of sources), skills to read sophisticated material(reading difficult texts underlies writing accurately), discernment of main ideas(using subject´s key concepts in the task demonstrates the learning and understanding of the topic), strategies for being synthetic, analytical and critical to new information (inferring the topic, its key concepts and recognizing the connections among them).

IN COLLEGE, EVERTHING´S AN ARGUMENT: A GUIDE FOR DECODING COLLEGE WRITING ASSIGNMENTS
Literacy tasks begin with an argument in which a claim (thesis statement) is presented. The thesis is sustained by reasonable supporting material based on evidence. The purpose of the claim is to get the audience´s regard (even approval) of the point of view presented in it. The more evidence, the more persuaded people will be. Academic Writing is an Analysis with three characteristics: 1) open inquiry; 2) identification of subject´s parts; 3) examination of these parts separately and determination of the relationship among them. The three common types of Writing Assignments are: 1) The Close: the claim is presented explicitly, therefore the writer needs to add supporting material only; 2) The Semi-Open: the claim is implicitly planned in the task, thus, the writer needs to investigate in depth to create a thesis plus supporting material; 3) The Open: the writer chooses the topic, writes the claim and its supporting material. Investigation and limiting the topic are needs.

Three Characteristics of Academic Writing
According to Chris Thaiss and Terry Zawacki, Academic Writing has three features:
1)Persistency, open mind, and disciplined study on the part of the writer.
2) Dominance of reason over emotion.
3) Rational imagined audience.

THE FORMAT OF THE ACADEMIC WRITING
It is called Critical Essay by the author, and has specific textual characteristics, which are flexible:
1)  It has a claim and supporting material;
2) The thesis is disputable;
3) It is organized in an Introduction, Body and Conclusion;
4) The sources are the text (quotations needed), the assert (thesis statement) and, at least, three supports for each assert;
5)Documenting the sources (differentiation of outsider and insider information). Clarifying where the information was obtained;
6)  Transition sentences must be clear and must have a link to the thesis statement;
7) Use of MLA or APA for bibliography;
8)  Few or no grammar mistakes.

CONCLUSION
Achieving academic writing skills is based on the recognition of what is being done and the understanding of writing assignments, regarding its features and plausible steps.

Bibliography

Irvin, Lennie L., what is Academic Writing?. Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Volume 1. Ed. Charles Lowe, Pavel Zemliansky. Parlor Press. 2010. Print.









sábado, 7 de junio de 2014

CLASS#4 - Metacognitive Reflection: Students´ failure

ISFD 41 - Language and Written Expression IV - Saubidet Stella
Areco Yesica - Perez Stefania  
June 2014

       Our assignment was not up to standard the first time because we omit important characteristics of a paragraph. First of all, we did not realize the fact that a paragraph cannot have a full stop. Also, the topic sentence was divided in two, something that contributed to miss the real point of the sentece and also made our work even more difficult because, while writing, there was no real topic to develop in the supporting sentences. In addition, cohesion was not attained at all, since some of the connectors were found in the wrong places. Another aspect has to do with the fact that many time we repeated sentences but did not clarify any idea, and so we turned around the same concept. Last but not least, we had to change some words and phrases not only to add coherence but also to add cohesion to the text. We recognized that the material we have is necessary in order to get cohesion and coherence and to develop a good paragraph. Writing a paragraph it is not as simple as it looks like.

CLASS#4 - NEW VERSION OF STUDENTS´ FAILURE

ISFD 41 – Language and Written Expression IV – Saubidet Stella                                                 
Areco Yesica – Perez Stefania                                                          
June 2014              




Students´ failure at Primary School

Students´ lack of success when they are young may be attributed to external factors concerning their life at home and at school. One of the causes is the misuse of computers because, most of the time, children use the device as game consoles but not to study or look for information. Generally, these children are not controlled by any adult. Thus a second factor recalls to parent´s absence from home, since they need to go to work and, consequently, cannot help their children to accomplish their assignments. Hence, what constitutes a third prompt of unsuccessful learning is related to students´ teachers, taking into account that if they were excessively demanding, they would give students low marks for not doing their tasks. All in all, students’ failure at school involves outer factors rather than students’ capacity of learning.


Causes that make students fail vs. causes that help students learn

All throughout Primary education, children are affected by several factors that influence their learning; some of them are concerned with their life at home and others to the role of teachers. Difficulties come to light in children who regularly spend long hours doing useless activities in the computers as they have the possibility to play online or to chat with their friends. Closely related are the figures of parents who insufficiently control their children. If a student's family is experiencing violence, unemployment, alcohol or drug use by a family member, problems with the law, or any other upsetting experience, it can be difficult to concentrate on schoolwork. Many students who are having family problems might have trouble controlling their anger and frustration at school, and they may end up in trouble because of their behaviour. Also the performance of teachers plays a considerably role. Teaching students good learning strategies would ensure that they know how to acquire new knowledge, which leads to improved learning outcomes. Learning must connect to something that the student already knows or feels. If not, it won't be absorbed. Yet, it is imperative the presence of the family during the learning process. Parents who spend vital time with their children encourage them to follow a profitable routine and make them feel safe and confident. Knowing that they have a framework when studying, they will be able to consider the computer as a tool to study and use it accordingly, not only to play or chat but also to carry out tasks or look for information. Students at risk of school failure need to be identified as early as possible in their school to receive the help they need. This task usually falls to the teacher or parents, because many students are hostile to or disconnected from the educational system and will not or do not know how to ask for help. Parents and teachers must work together to bring failing students back to school and help them to achieve goals, the reasons for school failure need to be recognized and treated. 

CLASS#4 - STUDENTS´ FAILURE AT PRIMARY SCHOOL


Students’ failure at Primary School


It is widely known that students fail during their experience at Primary School. The reasons may be plenty, though most of them are related to external features. ---------------------
One of the characteristics is related to the time children devote to the overuse of computers. Typically, students abuse the device, since most of the time they play computer games and communicate each other via social networks, a fact that may turn time consuming. Generally, the children who spent time using the computers are not controlled by any adult. Therefore, a second feature of students failure, recalls to parents absence from their homes due to the fact that they need to go to work, practically the whole day. Consequently, children are uncontrolled and do not accomplish their school assignments. Thirdly, teachers’ attitudes impact on students learning. For instance, teachers that are excessively demanding affect children´s learning in a negative way and thus students may create the belief they are not able to reach the required level of performance that the teachers ask. -----------------------------
In conclusion, students’ failure is determined by a large amount of facts. However, the majority of them are concerned with outer characteristics rather than students’ capacity of learning.



Causes that make students fail vs. causes that help students learn

All throughout Primary education, children are affected by varied factors that influence their learning either negatively or positively. Highlighted aspects areconcerned with their life at home and the role of teachers. --------------------------------------------
Difficulties arise in children who regularly spent long hours doing useless activities in the computers as they have the possibility to play online or to chat with their friends. Closely related are the figures of parents who insufficiently control their children. This is associated with their absence from home or because they pay more attention to younger members of the family. In any case, the role of teachers plays a considerably role. Children spend a significant amount of time at school having as a reference their teacher. As such, if the teacher is excessively demanding students may feel overwhelmed, or if the teacher works idly students may feel that it is not necessary to accomplish any kind of activity. Conversely, if teachers are able to know how their students learn or to use varied strategies in the classroom, she consequently will have the capacity of imparting meaningful education. Yet, it is imperative the presence of the family during the learning process. Parents who spend vital time with their children encourage them to follow a profitable routine and make them feel safe and confident. Knowing that they have a framework when studying, they will be able to consider the computer as a tool to study and use it accordingly, not only to play or chat but also to carry out tasks or look for information.-----------------------------
In sum, children are surrounded by two-sided factors since they can be either negative or positive. However, the three factors already mentioned are potentially beneficial for students if used properly.

miércoles, 7 de mayo de 2014

CLASS #3 - STRUCTURE OF A WELL-WRITTEN PARAGRAPH

Academic writing

    In the writing process, there are several steps and rules that we, as writers, must follow in order to reach accurate and comprehensible pieces of work. Some of the rules and patterns that should be taken into account are as follow:

  • TOPIC SENTENCE: concept that is going to be developed. Thesis statement: general sentence to introduce the topic. Indent or skip a line (though not both ,as regards the style of writing for example A.P.A or what you have been asked to use).
  • BODY: argumentative sentences that support directly the topic sentence. The concrete details must be careful chosen; it is necessary to regard the importance of the supporting sentences; it is necessary to give reasons for the sentences; and it is helpful to provide the reader with examples to clarify concepts that appear in the body of the paragraph. All the information should be chronologically ordered as well. The sentences and different paragraphs in a piece of writing should be bridged in order to give coherence to the whole piece.
  • CLOSING SENTENCES: restate the topic sentence differently. It has two functions: 1. remind the audience about the topic sentence; 2. make them think about the topic.

  • We must try  on several versions before deciding on the definite writing and reading aloud is also an important step.

REFERENCES

Alex (engVid AlexESLvid). (19/05/2009). Parts of a Paragraph - English Academic Writing Introduction. Retrieved 06/05/2014 from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCuExRE6N-4#t=32

Adam (engvid). (22/07/2013). Writing Skills: the Paragraph. Retrieved 06/05/2014 from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0IFDuhdB2Hk#t=63

Edge Hill University MedDev. (22/06/2013). Introduction to Academic Writing. Retrieved 06/05/2014 from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CelpkwseU5U#t=46 

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